would anyone awake be willing to check out my solution rough draft?

samouraidelespace:

carpe-cerevisi:

it’s basically my scribble together of words since i’m half asleep right now i just need to know whether my ideas are on the right track or not :((( like the writing is so shitty it was basically a late night pull together. 

ACTUALLY HERE’S A LINK TO THE FULL PAPER JUST SCROLL DOWN TO SOLUTIONS AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THE IDEA

it’s very very good but please tell me you’re going to tidy it up before you submit it cos from „It would be foolish to abolish the presidency….” it’s very messy but yeah, fab ideas tho!

oh dude yeah don’t worry i am doing another rewrite in like two hours after i get some sleep but yeah it’s very badly written right now hahahah i just wanted to know if the concepts were okay 

that is how i work by the way i do one shitty first run that’s like a pile of bullshit and then two or three rewrites to make it sound decent